Wednesday, February 20, 2013

#20 The other shoe

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She finished her make up and went to put on her perfume. Her favorite scent wafted over her and she smiled thinking of the evening ahead.

She went into her closet and got out the dress, silky, sexy and a bit risqué. She hung it on the door and then went to put on her garters, hose and stilettos. 

As she sat down and began putting on one stocking she heard the downstairs door and smiled knowing he was home. She hurried to snap the garter in place and picked up her other stocking and repeated the process. She slipped on one stiletto as he walked through the doorway. She picked up the other shoe and met his eyes. 
He shut the door and locked it with a click. 

“You won’t be needing those” he said with a smile.
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26 comments:

  1. Jayne MartinFebruary 20, 2013 at 10:09 AM

    This is wonderful! I love the economy with which you told this complete tale and a good twist ending always has me saying, "Bravo!" :)

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    1. life in the mom laneFebruary 20, 2013 at 10:31 AM

      Thanks... :) I'm not a "writer" like many of you, so I hesitated even trying this.

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  2. P.J.February 20, 2013 at 10:19 AM

    Well that's a bit risque!

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  3. LindaFebruary 20, 2013 at 11:14 AM

    Not a writer? Ha! This was great!

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  4. nonamedufusFebruary 20, 2013 at 2:11 PM

    What, no dinner or a movie first?

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  5. ZivaFebruary 20, 2013 at 3:01 PM

    Oh my! I loved this, Barb, you definitely need to write more stuff like this! :)

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    1. life in the mom laneFebruary 21, 2013 at 5:29 AM

      thanks Ziva!- as I LOVE your writing this made me smile :)

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  6. http://howtobecomeacatladywithoutthecats.blogspot.comFebruary 20, 2013 at 3:17 PM

    I'm guessing that's when the other shoe dropped! Well played, Barb!

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  7. laughingmomFebruary 20, 2013 at 3:27 PM

    How did you know what Nicky did last night?

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  8. nickyfFebruary 20, 2013 at 5:27 PM

    Wow, Barb. This is awesome! Well done, woman. Well done!

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  9. MalisaFebruary 20, 2013 at 5:42 PM

    Hello! That's what I'm talkin' about! Very nice post. Quick. To the point. Slam. Bam. Thank you, m'am. :)

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    1. life in the mom laneFebruary 21, 2013 at 5:28 AM

      thanks Malisa! I read a lot of fiction and know what I like and don't like... In my job I have to write reports which are concise and to the point so I guess it has crossed over into my "creative" writing. :)

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  10. KatherineFebruary 20, 2013 at 7:20 PM

    That is SO ROMANTIC AND SWEET! Made me smile... !

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  11. MikeWJ at Too Many MorningsFebruary 20, 2013 at 8:38 PM

    How much would it cost me to hear the end of this sordid tale featuring one of my favorite subjects, women in heels and hose? I have my credit card standing by, Barb.

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  12. KZFebruary 21, 2013 at 1:38 AM

    Wow, this one caught my attention. Very nicely done, Barb.

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  13. not displayedFebruary 21, 2013 at 1:42 AM

    Very enjoyable story. Thank you :)

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  14. Indigo RothFebruary 22, 2013 at 11:27 AM

    Lovely set up, Barb!

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